Develop a sequel to the story. Make sure that you use descriptive language, suspense, and resolution. 200 words.
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Jacorian Clayton
9/4/2014 03:44:27 am
The Sequel
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Jaylin Harris
9/8/2014 01:57:21 am
That was an interesting story, Jacorian, I like the sequence of events in the story and the order of them.
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Dagfinn Knutsen
9/8/2014 10:19:21 pm
Wow, this was so well written....Just wow
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Eryn Johnson
9/8/2014 10:41:41 pm
I liked the way you made the story flow. Good job!
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Michael Ruiz
9/9/2014 02:51:23 am
I LOVE IT JOCO XD nice job ;D
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9/16/2014 03:33:32 am
I like the flow of the story and the suspense leading up to him being found by pirates
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Eryn Johnson
9/4/2014 10:55:21 pm
The Sequel
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Hailey Mueller
9/8/2014 02:52:42 am
I like your sequel, Eryn!! I like the way you added on from "A Dangerous Game!"
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Dagfinn Knutsen
9/5/2014 12:59:45 am
The Sequel
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Jacorian Clayton
9/7/2014 10:59:57 pm
I thought it was really interesting the way you made Rainsford change his morals and switch to Zaroff's of hunting humans.
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9/8/2014 01:46:30 am
that was quite good. i agree with Jacorian, i think it was cool that you had Rainsford change his mind
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Hailey Mueller
9/8/2014 02:51:31 am
Very interesting Dagfinn. I like how you included yourself.
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Eryn Johnson
9/8/2014 10:43:21 pm
This is an interesting interpretation on the "sequel" good job Dagfinn
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MICHAEL RUIZ
9/9/2014 02:57:46 am
I like it dagfinn good job ;D
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Rebecca Mann
9/10/2014 10:20:33 pm
This was interesting... Its sort of obvious that you wrote it Dagfinn
Kayla Lambiase
9/14/2014 02:22:07 am
Could totally tell you wrote this, I like the sequel. I agree with everyone on how you had him change his mind
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9/16/2014 03:31:48 am
That was jacked up. But I like it shows what could have happened if Raiinsford did decide to hunt people.
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bre pope
9/5/2014 05:17:31 pm
After Rainsford woke up that early morning he decided to move away and start a new life. He found a boat and sailed to Florida and made his way to Seattle. It took him three weeks to get there.
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9/6/2014 07:16:43 pm
The Sequel
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Anders Lid
9/8/2014 10:42:20 pm
Awesome! i really like that you included the sailors that were trapped in the basement.
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bailey
10/16/2014 10:17:31 pm
good one!
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9/6/2014 11:21:54 pm
Emily Cranford
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Jacorian Clayton
9/7/2014 11:07:20 pm
I thought it was really cool how you used dialogue to write the sequel, but this sentence confused me "Everyone in the room was silent, gaping at Rainsford, and then all at once they started cheering."...Gaping? or Gasping?
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Jaylin Harris
9/8/2014 02:24:15 am
That was a great story Emily. You provided a very detailed sequel that made it interesting to read.
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Dagfinn Knutsen
9/9/2014 12:59:08 am
Very well written, surely better than mine :D
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Rebecca Mann
9/10/2014 10:23:54 pm
i really like this epilogue Emily! You added a lot of detail and dialogue. I also liked how you had Rainsford go and free the other people on the island.
Kayla Lambiase
9/14/2014 02:20:05 am
Well written, I like your use of dialogue and description, it makes the text more interesting to read and creates an image
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Yazeed Alrajhi
9/6/2014 11:33:46 pm
Sequel to The Most Dangerous Game by Yazeed Alrajhi September 7th 2014
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Andreas A
9/9/2014 05:56:49 am
I like how you made Rainsford the killer now! Cool story!
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Bekan Can
9/15/2014 10:26:10 pm
Nice story.
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Tomas Volenec
9/7/2014 04:00:44 am
The Sequel
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Andreas A
9/9/2014 05:53:58 am
I like how you took mythical creatures to your story! I liked it, good story.
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Yazeed Alrajhi
9/13/2014 08:56:15 pm
I loved this part "Once he pushed himself away from the Island, he saw Zaroff yelling: ''I will find you, and i will kill you!'' While floating on the seay, Rainsford found the boat he fell off." it's awesome.
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Rebecca Mann
9/7/2014 06:14:13 am
The Sequel
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9/8/2014 01:51:32 am
that was good. i like how you had him change his views on hunting.
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Bekan Can
9/7/2014 03:55:23 pm
The Sequel
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Andreas Adoson
9/7/2014 06:03:03 pm
After I killed the Zaroff I went to look around in his house to find something to get out of here! When I got in the house I looked around! I found a secret door that went down stairs! It was like a cave. In the cave were two boats! One was a row boat and the other boat was big and hand a gun on it! I think he even went to get people on water. I went upstairs again to look around! I walked in a room that was big and had animal heads on the wall! Suddenly I noticed that there weren't only animal heads! There were human heads. From kids to elders. I panicked! I ran to the boat dock to get off the Island. It wasn't the brightest down there. I tried to look for a button that would open the door. I found the lever and opened the huge door. I climbed on the boat and started it. I set my course full ahead, but suddenly my boat crushed in to something in the cave and I didn’t move anymore. I looked in front of the boat to look and I saw something shining back. I jumped in the water to look what it is. It was a submarine. I didn’t have an idea how to get in there. So I backed up with the boat and passed the submarine and started to sail to the nearest town.
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Tomas Volenec
9/11/2014 12:19:41 am
I really like your idea of the new ending. Only thing you should do is to add more comas.
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Jaylin Harris
9/8/2014 01:45:45 am
Jaylin Harris
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Hailey Mueller
9/8/2014 02:50:32 am
The Sequel
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Michael Ruiz
9/9/2014 03:45:35 am
The Sequel On The Dangerous Game By: Michael Ruiz
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bailey
10/16/2014 10:18:55 pm
Realy Cool.
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Anders Lid
9/9/2014 04:44:11 am
After defeating Zaroff, I wondered what happened to Whitney. However, the thought disappeared when I realized, how am I going to get off this island? I searched around the whole island but I did not find anything to help me make a plan, so I thought wait, Zaroff said something about having captured some sailors in his basement? I now searched even more enthusiastically, I searched under carpets, under paintings, anywhere there could be a secret door or switch, until final, under the rug right in front of the door I first entered Zaroff’s house I found a door leading down into the basement. I walked down a long corridor until I found a door. I knocked on the door to see if anyone was there, but I got no reply, so I carefully opened the door and entered a completely dark room. I felt around the walls to see if I could find a light switch, I touched something that felt like a button, and the room lit up, and what I saw was…. Absolutely nothing. All this hope for nothing I thought, just an empty room. When I went back upstairs I looked some more around just in case, but still nothing.
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Yazeed Alrajhi
9/13/2014 08:58:22 pm
I love it.
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Bekan Can
9/15/2014 10:28:43 pm
I like your story but the ending could be better
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bailey
10/16/2014 10:18:03 pm
I like it!
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bailey
10/16/2014 10:18:27 pm
Amazing
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Tomas Volenec
9/11/2014 12:25:13 am
Your sequel started well, but i don't like your ending. You should at least say if he died, or got away. I like your vocab. too :)
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Kayla Lambiase
9/14/2014 02:17:50 am
Sequel to " The Most Dangerous Game"
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Leanna Acosta-Veilleux
10/6/2014 11:28:59 pm
The Most Dangerous Game part 2
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