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Ms. M
8/20/2012 07:29:08 am
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Avery
8/27/2012 03:01:18 am
I am just "trying out" this whole creative criticism so please don't take it personally. But I wish you could have elaborated more on what you would DO with last moments. I feel like you are holding back something great!
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Grace Katzenson
8/23/2012 04:48:19 am
The Big Questions Number 5
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Avery
8/26/2012 05:42:57 am
I agree! :) This actually is very easy to relate to people and situations in my life (y)
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Luke Narug
8/29/2012 07:05:52 am
Just like our moms always say "life isn't fair" haha
De' Jean Clement
8/28/2012 02:39:56 am
Good is based on perspective rather than a definite idea. Both good and evil are non-existing as cosmic factors, which is the definite level of truth. Good and evil is only what we think it is, but never definite ideas. They are things only in us as feelings; they are not actual factors. Society tries to physically make good and evil real. The only clear goal to life is happiness; nothing else matters but happiness. No morals, no standards. Happiness is the only thing of life-worth.
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Marcus
8/30/2012 01:45:17 am
What happens when one being's "happiness" counteracts with another? It is my belief that good can easily be described as the most efficiant process for the continual growth and evolution of life as a whole.
De' Jean Clement
8/28/2012 02:41:19 am
Good=not real
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Josh
8/28/2012 04:27:00 am
Great job! :)
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Ashley Amidan
8/28/2012 07:18:11 am
I like the ideas and perspective you take, but a couple of specific examples couldn't hurt.
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Avery
8/26/2012 05:41:38 am
I have taken regular English my entire HS career, so don't judge AP!
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Grace Katzenson
8/28/2012 03:56:55 am
I really like the way your answers seem so honest and instead of going a traditional way, you come up with ideas on how to combine them and make the most of it.
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Taylor P
8/28/2012 06:08:46 am
I agree with Grace! Your answers are super honest and they have a raw sense to them. I like your ideas!
Sarah
8/28/2012 04:11:06 am
I think it's cool you commented on how cliche it is. Also, you still would be spending your last moments with your loved ones, your closest friends, though in a unique way, which would leave a legacy of sorts. Good job.
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Joshua Young
8/28/2012 04:25:07 am
This is really good and you went in detail! Couple things could be a little different but other than that, great job :)
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Ryan
8/28/2012 08:40:05 pm
I like that it feels like you're actually talking to me and responding as if I asked the questions.
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Hayle
8/29/2012 01:39:18 am
this is deep avery.. I really liked it though, I mean most people would just say they of course would spend time with family but your whole "journey to the peaceful death" perspective is interesting & made me keep reading.
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aldon
8/29/2012 06:57:05 am
seemed deep not a sappy answer you where really honest (Y)
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Luke Narug
8/29/2012 07:10:03 am
This is great! It feels like anyone reading this can really connect to what youre saying. And the burger thing sounds pretty dang cool
Taylor P.
8/26/2012 07:50:42 pm
Question number 5:
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De' Jean Clement
8/28/2012 02:54:21 am
Life to a person is "unfair" halfly because you don't bother to make it fair or better. And if you fail...either lay down and accept it or do something about and for your happiness. If you fail and give up, you have just wasted your life. No shred of blame goes to the world; it's either shame on you or nothing else. You can always give in and find happiness in the sheltered world, but if you have the ugly audicity or boldness to complain about it's "unjust", then either take a pill or do something about it.
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Sarah
8/28/2012 04:21:27 am
Good ideas, especially at the end. There are some run-on sentences, but the content is very good. :)
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Ashley Amidan
8/28/2012 07:24:20 am
I like your use of common sayings; "what goes around comes around", "do unto others..." to help support your point, it makes it very relatable.
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Sarah Seitz
8/28/2012 03:55:06 am
Q: A range of academic interests, personal perspectives, and life experiences adds much to the educational mix. Given your personal background, describe an experience that illustrates what you would bring to the diversity in a college community or an encounter that demonstrated the importance of diversity to you.
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Avery
8/28/2012 04:04:08 am
I like how you went into great detail! :) Very good.
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Grace Katzenson
8/28/2012 04:15:01 am
I really like your opening statement. It drew me in and made me want to read more. Also with the rest of it you did an excellent job talking about what you have gone through without seeming whiny, making something that relates to me, as one who has also moved around a lot, and finally, despite voicing some hardships, being positive about it because though some times are tough, the experiences are amazing.
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Deniz
8/28/2012 06:10:40 am
I completely understand when you say that you have trouble saying where you are from, having to explain it over and over again becomes tedious after a while :/
Ryan
8/28/2012 08:41:07 pm
Very nice details.
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De'Jean
8/28/2012 05:23:14 am
No Evil
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Christian G
8/28/2012 05:30:46 am
Big Question 1- dying for something.
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Daren A.
9/4/2012 07:04:00 pm
I do agree fully with you that when it comes to what you value most in life, that your life should take the lowest priority, if this is truly what you believe in. Nice one.
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Monica B-V
8/28/2012 05:32:09 am
Last Minutes of my Life.
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Nick F
8/28/2012 05:33:38 am
Dream or Reality?
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Hayle
8/29/2012 01:37:18 am
This was good. I liked the details that really painted a picture in my mind. nice job.
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Sarah
8/30/2012 07:39:11 am
Awesome ideas. I wondered how I would answer that question, and you did it great. :)
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Daren
8/28/2012 05:34:40 am
Which is the most “real”?
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Deniz Ozer
8/28/2012 07:00:34 am
Question 5.
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Ashley Amidan
8/28/2012 07:15:29 am
Q: Evaluate a significant experience, achievement, risk you have taken, or ethical dilemma you have faced and its impact on you.
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Ryan P.
8/28/2012 08:38:01 pm
WILL A GOOD PERSON NECESSARILY BE HAPPY BECAUSE THEY DO GOOD?
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Aldon
8/29/2012 06:51:52 am
I like your point of view and have to agree with certain parts
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Patrick.S
8/28/2012 10:27:40 pm
Q.8
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Luke Narug
8/29/2012 07:04:37 am
this really is an unanswerable question! You have expressed some great thoughts and insights as to how to solve it.
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Hayle S.
8/29/2012 01:35:46 am
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Sarah
8/30/2012 07:44:48 am
Great. :) I especially liked the rhetorical question at the end, it really proved your point.
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River Shank
8/29/2012 06:03:59 am
What I’d Die for
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Daren A.
9/4/2012 07:08:44 pm
I find that the innvitability of life makes it so that you often miss the key moment when taking a bullet for someone is most vital. It is unfortunate,knowing the feeling all too well. Life is sadly enough more fragile then we tend to realize.
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River Shank
8/29/2012 06:04:41 am
I agree with most of the people's comments x2.
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Aldon Pagio
8/29/2012 06:50:07 am
Aldon Pagio
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Aldon
8/29/2012 06:55:17 am
You are a hero could not have said it any other way myself ;)
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Luke Narug
8/29/2012 07:01:42 am
The Big Questions- #1.
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aldon
8/29/2012 07:16:16 am
:P a little short wish you could explain more you got me on the edge of my seat wanting more ;)
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Question 1
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Josh Y.
9/2/2012 04:04:40 am
Last Moments
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Haynie M
9/9/2012 05:47:19 am
Sorry, Ms. Moriconi. This reflective essay is late, and I am aware that I may not get any credit, but I have to be able to say that I at least turned it in.
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