Harleigh P.
3/5/2015 04:14:31 am
http://socialanxietypoetry.weebly.com/
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Jessica G.
3/10/2015 08:07:09 am
I like the format of your website. It makes it easier to move around and view pages. The poems you choose to analyze were well written as well as your analyses. I like how you viewed it by separating the poem into several lines. However, try to connect the poems to TEWWG and The Awakening if possible. Other than that, good job on the website and your original poem. :)
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Joshua K.
3/5/2015 06:12:35 pm
http://aidss.weebly.com/
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Logan H
3/9/2015 08:52:59 pm
Your website was well put together, however I think for the connections to other literature you need to include more about TEWWG and The Awakening. I also would have appreciated a photo of the poets where possible.
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Torin C.
3/5/2015 09:23:02 pm
http://theeffectofptsd.weebly.com/
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Joshua K.
3/8/2015 09:00:22 pm
Very nice layout and good explanation of PTSD, however some of these analysis was very short and the reader doesn't really get to know who the author's of the poems are, in terms of how established they are.
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Gabriel H.
3/6/2015 03:59:46 am
http://lughmythology.weebly.com
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Joshua K.
3/8/2015 08:58:45 pm
I liked your website's look, and the poems and analysis were good to read and easy to find, however my only issue is that I couldn't see the poet biographies anywhere.
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Logan H
3/6/2015 05:17:19 am
http://survivalpoem.weebly.com/
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Caitlyn H.
3/11/2015 07:19:05 pm
The layout and organization of your poem was great. Everything was easily accessed and presentable. Your analyses of the various poems were also very thorough. In addition, your selection of the artwork was nice as they allowed for a connection to the selected poems. Nice job!
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Zach C.
3/6/2015 05:52:50 am
http://thethingsweallfear.weebly.com/
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Caroline
3/10/2015 11:21:46 pm
The website has a simple design but I like that because it relates to your theme well. I liked how you related the issue to books that we read in class because they were easier for me to relate to. Your analysis's for all of the poems are very thorough and detailed. I liked how there's little pictures beside each author's biography, which was a nice touch
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Gabriel H.
3/11/2015 07:51:41 pm
Your website has a really good layout and formatting. Your website has interesting pictures and all the necessary information for the most part. Overall I think the design of the website is really cool.
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Jessica gG.
3/6/2015 07:07:22 am
http://ocdpoetry.weebly.com
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Cole H
3/9/2015 06:14:21 pm
I liked your website. It was very well organized and your poems and the analyses were quite thorough. I would suggest that with your biographies, you may want to make those bullet points, and for the author whose biography you couldn't find, maybe see if there was another. Other than those couple of things, well done.
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Sophia M
3/10/2015 11:21:31 pm
I have more recently been diagnosed with OCD, so I am very familiar with what it is and how it can really effect an individual. I think your poem was great and really got the message of the disorders impact across to the reader. I also love the formatting! :)
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Caitlyn H.
3/6/2015 09:14:14 am
http://orpheusandeurydicelove.weebly.com
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Shaina L.
3/10/2015 11:30:26 pm
I truly enjoyed your original poem. The short, fragmented sentences really emphasized the idea of the short romance between Orpheus and Eurydice. I also thought your use of the "tunnel" image as a backdrop to your entire site represented the passage, through which Orpheus attempted to rescue Eurydice, was very clever. Perhaps the horizon never met?
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Zach C.
3/10/2015 11:33:41 pm
The layout and design of your website was superb. The background fit your topic perfectly and everything flowed together very well. Something that bugged me a little bit was that you had your analysis of the poems on the bottom of the page. This bugged me a tad because I had to keep scrolling back and forth to get to your poems and then back to your analysis. Besides that, it was great #swag
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Frida O.L.
3/11/2015 12:19:03 am
I really liked the outlay of your website, it fit well together with the topic you picked. The paintings/sculpture you selected to go along with the poems fit very well also. I think your analyses and poet bios might have been a bit short, but other than that, everything seemed great.
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Logan H
3/11/2015 07:59:57 pm
I really like your choice of background, artwork, and the overall design of your website. I also thought your original poem was eloquent and well thought out. The only criticism I have is that the connections to other literature needs to be expanded.
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Cole H
3/6/2015 09:15:35 am
http://judgmentofparis.weebly.com/
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Joshua K.
3/8/2015 09:01:36 pm
Everything appeared to be there and looked quite nice, the only thing perhaps would be to put the analysis of the poems next to the poems.
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Logan H
3/11/2015 08:07:39 pm
I found your insight linking the origin of so many myths to Paris' decision interesting. I also like the selection of art that you included and thought your analyses were on point. My suggestion for the future would be simply to include more background information and more analysis.
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Sophia Munoz
3/6/2015 07:44:56 pm
http://psychologicalissue-depression-sophiam.weebly.com/
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Jessica G.
3/10/2015 08:04:47 am
Your analyses of the poems were very thorough and I loved the incorporation of classic art pieces into your site. Well done on your original poem. :)
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Caitlyn H.
3/17/2015 06:24:22 am
Your topic was a very interesting one. It is an issue and I think that your poems, including your original one, show the struggles of the disorder that you chose. Specifically, I found your oringinal poem to be very well thought out and it still had a sort of emotional demand of the audience. The layout was very nice as well. The background about depression was nice to include. It may be interesting to know how many people it affects as well. Overall nice job.
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Frida Ø. L.
3/7/2015 10:14:28 am
http://death-and-dying.weebly.com
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Caroline
3/10/2015 11:15:06 pm
I liked the layout of your website a lot it was easy to read and use. The pictures matched well with the theme.I liked how thorough your analysis's were for each poem, which must have taken a lot of work to do.I never thought about adding a video to my website but that was a good idea.
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Harleigh
3/10/2015 11:25:07 pm
I love how you put together your poem and its analysis. It is very clear and thorough. I can tell you put a lot of work into them. Well done, your website is very well put together. The only thing that you haven't touched on that much are the connections to other literature. Also, I quite liked your original poem (:
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Sophia Munoz
3/10/2015 11:30:58 pm
I enjoyed your video clip and I thought it related to the topic really well! Overall, you did very well but I do think that when you are writing your analysis you could possibly use less quotations and have more hard analysis. Great job :)
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Jesus S.
3/10/2015 11:41:06 pm
I loved the way you did your website. Your annotations were clear and the pictures of the authors were there. I liked the website in entirety. If i had to point out something you can change, it would be the access of your pages. Having to click the "more" button was not convenient, but that does not really matter too much. Your website was very well thought out. Your poem was really good too. But, where was your annotation? HA HA, Just kidding.
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Gabriel H.
3/11/2015 08:01:14 pm
I like the text formatting you had with your poems and analysis. You also had some really cool artwork. However.However, I did not see any connections to other literature.
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Cole H
3/9/2015 06:26:12 pm
I am always impressed by your presentation. You obviously put in a lot of effort to this project. The way you organized your analysis was very clever and well done. The only issue was that parts seemed to be missing/not quite done. Maybe look back at it and edit a little bit. other than that, good.
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Caroline R
3/8/2015 05:12:58 pm
panthegod.weebly.com
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Torin C.
3/10/2015 11:12:11 pm
Your website is very well done, you have four poems each with a biography on the author. Different art for each page, and a work cited. You also included your own poem.
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Harleigh
3/10/2015 11:19:35 pm
Your analysis of the poems is well put together. The side by side comparison between what the actual line is and what you got from it made it very easy to read and understand what you're saying. The analysis is only lacking a connection to other literature (TEWWG or The Awakening). Your site is very organised and well put together for the most part. The only issue I could find was the author bios weren't as clearly indicated as they could've been. Otherwise, well done.
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Jesus S.
3/10/2015 11:31:30 pm
i really liked the myth that you were working on. You represented it very well and i think your poems were of good use. One suggestion to put your website over the top is to try to find pictures of the authors of the poems so we can see what THEY look like. Other than that, excellent job and high fives!!
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Frida O.L.
3/11/2015 12:24:20 am
Your website looked very nice. Despite your analyses being a bit short, I liked the fact that you put each part next to the stanza you were analyzing because it made it easier to follow. For the author bios, I think it might have been beneficial to have put the information in bullet points. Other than that, everything seemed good, and your original poem was great!
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Jesus S.
3/8/2015 11:14:26 pm
http://www.youneedjesusbrah.weebly.com
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Zach C.
3/10/2015 11:18:40 pm
The layout and design of your website was neat and organized;everything flowed together nicely. Additionally, your theme was awesome; it fit perfectly with your topic. Something that I would've done though is have the poem analysis and the poem itself divided into lines like the poem so that its easier to read. Otherwise, I really liked it #respect
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Shaina L.
3/10/2015 11:47:54 pm
Your analyses were very thorough. Great job of using rhetorical device terms in your explanation. The only real issue I found was that your introduction on your Homepage seemed too casual for your type of topic. It was also subjective towards your audience, despite probability that the statement does represent the majority of people's opinions (I am referring to the first sentence of the last paragraph of the introduction). Oh, and I think your original poem is missing.
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Torin C.
3/10/2015 11:16:13 pm
Great website, you have everything in their except the biography of the author Kevin Deckert and your own poem, if you have that then good, because I couldn't see it.
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Nash P.
3/12/2015 12:05:29 am
odinpoetry.weebly.com
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