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Jesus Sarabia
10/6/2014 10:23:40 pm
http://jesuslovesfood.weebly.com/
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Ms. M
10/9/2014 05:11:37 am
You have clearly identified how you will raise funds--but how those funds will be used specifically in the countries is vague. Think of the idea giving a man a fish only feeds him for a day, teaching a man to fish feeds him for a lifetime. More than mere delivery of food, how can you improve. What are the needs of the local populations?
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Ms. M
10/9/2014 05:19:15 am
Inclusion of a video should more specifically relate to the goals of the organization . Here, I am looking for more of a documentary approach or a song linked to specific issues. The current video is not exactly a professional choice to solicit donors or other organizations to your cause. Be a bit more specific about the types of environmental projects that your organization has participated in or developed rather than merely listing who you have served (argument from authority).
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Joshua K.
10/9/2014 05:58:42 pm
http://deathpenaltyjmk.weebly.com/
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Ms. M
10/9/2014 06:32:37 pm
Excellent use of information. Strong video link and graphics to highlight the issue. Strong development of your action plan. Excellent MLA works cited and further information.
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Natasha A.
10/11/2014 06:16:19 am
http://teenagepregerssupport.weebly.com/
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Christina D.
10/12/2014 02:55:50 am
http://actionplanforchange.weebly.com/
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Gabriel H.
10/12/2014 03:11:23 am
http://freedomexpression.weebly.com/
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Torin C.
10/12/2014 04:49:59 am
http://antianimalaggression.weebly.com/
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Frida Ø. L.
10/12/2014 07:01:45 am
http://actionplan-womensrightsindia.weebly.com
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Erica B.
10/12/2014 08:00:00 am
http://narcoticdrugsactionforchange.weebly.com/
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Cole H
10/12/2014 09:52:36 am
http://wannamarijuana.weebly.com/
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Caitlyn
10/12/2014 03:18:02 pm
http://changethedrinkingageinamerica.weebly.com/
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Jessica
10/12/2014 03:18:49 pm
http://militaryyouthwellness.weebly.com
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Caroline
10/12/2014 03:19:57 pm
http://rramazon.weebly.com/
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Harleigh
10/12/2014 03:27:34 pm
http://myhandswonthurt.weebly.com/
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Sophia Munoz
10/12/2014 11:00:40 pm
Sorry! I didn't realize I had to post it on here... I just sent it via e-mail, my apologies.
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Shaina
10/12/2014 11:11:09 pm
https://supportnetneutrality.weebly.com
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Zach
10/13/2014 10:41:49 pm
http://nomoreviolenceplease.weebly.com/
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Nash P.
10/13/2014 10:56:37 pm
http://privacyatrisk.weebly.com/
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